"I thought that the fourth stanza was a little awkward, but aside from that I liked the flow of this quite a bit. Grotesque! I like it. ;)" Posted by Bluegirl on "The Ice Cream Man" by SilentStalker
"Wow. Another poem which leaves me stunned. The feelings evoked by this one are so powerful for me.. Excellent work!" Posted by Bluegirl on "She Hurt Herself" by SilentStalker
