"I like the link you form between love and the sun/heat here. Although it could have been passion that you acutely felt, hinted at in the last stanza. Best I have read from you thus far - Crim" Posted by Crimson Shade on "The Sun's Passionate Dismissal " by SickSanityJenn
"Nice write. One of the few pieces I have read that actually made me feel. You are never alone, you have a kindred spirit in me - Crim" Posted by Crimson Shade on "Just Me, Myself and I " by SickSanityJenn
"Nice rhythm and rhyme makes this a pleasure to read. It's our inner demons we all fear the most." Posted by Crimson Shade on "Demons " by SickSanityJenn