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  • "You didn't tell me you were going to post again, so I almost missed this. /Yet it hangs Like a storm cloud In our veins. / These lines could have made a poem in themselves. It's lovely, one of my favorites of yours so far. :)"
    Posted by Unknown on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul
  • "you stole the breath from my lungs and the beats from my heart with the tone of this one, soooo very like pouring rain, the helpless hopelessness you portray...I want to cover myself in camoflauge and bandaids, so that I might disappear as well. ~*Beth*~"
    Posted by Unknown on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul
  • ""Call it education, all them books I didn't read. they just sat there on the shelf looking much smarter than me!" Just reminded me of that. Had a feeling of hopelessness, I just can't shake off since finishing this. Well done. Thanks for sharing."
    Posted by Alanarchy on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul
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