Comments by All Members
- "This is a bittersweet piece, both melancholic yet tender. It flowed beautifully, nicely done!"
Posted by IamZero on "Elegy" by Smiles
- "You're exactly right. It simply felt unfinished, which is why I titled it so, but I realize that it is finished. I have nothing left to add to this piece. I like your way of thinking I IS ME. Thank you."
Posted by Smiles on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "A lot of poetry isn't perfect. We actually try to write it out some pieces will be long some short. But they all will be you. Why attempt to write a piece and withhold a portion because you're worried it may be to long. We think this is also a form of suppression. The idea is to write until you've exhausted all the pain and filth. You wouldn't go to the bathroom and take a half movement. Anyways this is our way of thinking and we're no one. "
Posted by I IS ME on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "Sometimes it's hard to know when to stop and call it good. I try to keep that in mind, but no one's perfect. "
Posted by Smiles on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "Some of your best poets use couplets. The point is to write the way you feel it if you don't feel a stanza don't force it"
Posted by I IS ME on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "I'm happy you said I closed it perfectly. I was really thinking that I needed one last stanza. "
Posted by Smiles on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "Another one of yours that we like and you closed it perfectly. We're liking Smiles"
Posted by I IS ME on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "I think the structuring takes longer than the writing usually does. Thanks for reading Kaiser. "
Posted by Smiles on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "Yes like mentioned the repetition really works here. I like how you structure your writes, very well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Unfinished " by Smiles
- "You fucking nailed it. Seems we have a few things in common Kaiser. Thank you for making me feel not quite so alone. I appreciate it. "
Posted by Smiles on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
- "They simply aren't here anymore, because I was like a ghost. Present, but never really "there". I really appreciate that you went straight to defending me though. It shows what a great person you are. Thank you threeroses. "
Posted by Smiles on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
- "Your words brought back some memories and anger..If anyone makes you feel like a ghost he is an ass to start with. Hugs to you."
Posted by threeroses on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
- "“No one wants to sleep next to a ghost†I know the feeling of being there... but also not at the same time. Well written."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
- "I was laying in bed looking at the empty space next to me and the words just started flowing. Thank you for reading I IS ME. "
Posted by Smiles on "Please Come Home " by Smiles
