Comments by All Members
- "I've always admired writers that can bring forth such emotion from shorter writes. That first stanza hits like a truck and doesn't let up. Well written."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Broken " by RetalicD
- "A verbose, yet raw-knit quilt with an almost fractured cadence, the rhythm was seamless and I liked the use of ellipses to create pause, giving more weight to each line. Well written, please, enjoy your stay."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Broken " by RetalicD
- "Sad and visual. I can see the girl as the train pulls away. If I was that ticket master her despondent facial expression who be seared into my mind. Great write. JD."
Posted by Just Dave on "MY DREAM" by RetalicD
