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  • "Interesting read. Part of me wondered if this soul was its own entity or a realization of destiny. The past is so easily forgotten. Often easily re-written. This felt like part one of something potentially epic. Write on :)"
    Posted by Dilated View on "Dream on, starchild." by Iron Blood Orphan
  • "Truthfully, you may be seeing something I couldn't. But I did actually write this the night of my grandfather's death. It was a way to express something I was really trying to say among other things. I'm glad you found the same sense in it. Thank you."
    Posted by Iron Blood Orphan on "Obsidian" by Iron Blood Orphan
  • "Delicious mind food this , from the shards of the Sympathy cup to the masks of hydrangea it seems to mesh with the recent loss of my Aunt ... also I love the line "You seek diamonds in the soul you've sheltered so long" ... shines with such immaculate clarity against the obsidian ... it's a mothering thought ... quite captivating , thank you"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Obsidian" by Iron Blood Orphan
  • "Thank you. It's mostly just the feeling of desiring escape. Running away from home or a life that doesn't afford you humanity. Sometimes people just want to leave it all behind and pursue their dreams. They may be afraid to go without the proper support. Sometimes even just a long walk and a new plan means the world to someone."
    Posted by Iron Blood Orphan on "Dream on, starchild." by Iron Blood Orphan
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