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- "okay, im not really quite sure i understood what was going on here. for me there where a plethora of images being used but i found it hard to find the consistency. the style of this reminds me a lot of Gertrude Stein "
Posted by Morbid_insanity on "sleep walk cooking dream dance sitting" by WhoIAM
- "Wonderful. a moment of realization. a pure here sensation. well written. fit the topic perfectly."
Posted by Unknown on "salem" by WhoIAM
- "a flash flood of inspiration... drowned in the rush of revelation ....if only the epiphany were survivable ... perhaps could write The End. excellent piece."
Posted by elisa on "salem" by WhoIAM
- "P.S. I just realized how your username applies to what I just said. WhoyouARE, indeed."
Posted by Unknown on "salem" by WhoIAM
- "Hah. And yet, you did. In a very real way. I have become increasingly fond of your approach to poetry and the "simpler" things in life and how you focus on them to show their complexities. It's gorgeous and uplifting to find a poet who can find inspiration in the world around them, instead of inside their head where a fairytale exists. I admire this quality about you. Keep being you and shining so vividly as 'you' in your work, and I'll keep reading. Most definitely."
Posted by Unknown on "salem" by WhoIAM
- "Hmmm...used to have that thought untill i just receded into the silence of moments no one notices staring at the grass crystalized at night and the feeling of being alone. "
Posted by Unknown on "is this it?" by WhoIAM
- "i wonder the same thing. i like the simplicity of everything you write, it's so potent; and so precise."
Posted by Mari on "is this it?" by WhoIAM
- "Seems like the simplest moments are the purest form of poetry sometimes. Nicely done."
Posted by Unknown on "Distraction" by WhoIAM
- "Cruelty is a standard for an action acording to its already morally accepted normative value. In short by calling something cruel you aren't saying it's bad. You're saying it fits the standards of cruelty according to an already accepted value as to what makes it cruel. Like I say. I'm polishing off a bottle of wine being bored."
Posted by Unknown on "practicaly literal." by WhoIAM
- "Madness ain't so bad buddy boy. It's fun when you can alleviate any problem by rambling to yourself on a bus route. Anyway I detract. I'm being a hassle to you and repeating the same things over and over about your poetry. But I really liked the stanza: we are but sand waiting for the tide. Well not the stanza but you know. Insignificant future glass. Mmmmmm. Cowboy poetry for drunks."
Posted by Unknown on "Perhaps time is a imaginay friend." by WhoIAM
- "So devoid of intellectual academic analysis. I like it. It's just a simple explanation of things that are noticed by the subject so the product becomes not an idea but an event while it happens we read. I love your stuff dude. Layers can be seen but it's only what me in my self importance impart onto an otherwise basic reflection. you're good man. Onion."
Posted by Unknown on "i am most alone when there is a thunder shower." by WhoIAM
- "For some reason this poem. . .I don't know but i read it about 6 times. . .there is something about it that reminds me of a 50s gang drama. . .I just get the picture of a man in a striped suit with suede shoes sitting at his table with his gun in front of him. . .he's smoking and places them in the ash tray one by one and he sees a man across the alley in a brick building with a cracked window whose wearing a white shirt, suspenders and has thick black glasses working fervently at a typewriter and smoking a pipe. . ."
Posted by Lawless Fighter on "A man working in a window .(Thoughts after smoking poor weed.)" by WhoIAM
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