Comments by All Members
- "I disagree, I enjoy your use of language very much. It's eloquent, and it seems like it may just come naturally to you. Different perspectives! This one I very much enjoyed reading, especially that first line... darkness' son of a bitch cousin, Silence. Wonderful!"
Posted by Gypsyeighty3 on "My Dream Last Night" by SilenttPerception
- "This one is so well penned. You describe loneliness with an excellent point of view. I agree with just Dave the first lines are the impact of this work. Well done my friend well done!"
Posted by Willow Wept on "Doubt" by SilenttPerception
- "I've read all that you have posted. I like them all. I may not have commented and I'm sorry for that. Doubt...yea that was a favorite."
Posted by Willow Wept on "I see fire" by SilenttPerception
- "There's a lot of great things being said in this piece. There's an overwhelming feeling of confusion and frustration that, in my experience, comes with growing up and getting lost while trying to find yourself... God, that sounds cheesy."
Posted by Queazenart on "Somewhere New" by SilenttPerception
- "Good piece! My fav lines are "I want everything.
I want to be a mystery to you...untouchable.
A star all to myself a galaxy away from your starved fingers.
I want to love and be loved" - I think they capture the duality of your desires well. Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Somewhere New" by SilenttPerception
- "Wow, this is amazing. I'm not sure I've ever related so closely to a piece before but these are like words straight from my own mouth. If only I could write them as elegantly as you have, gj "
Posted by Unknown on "Somewhere New" by SilenttPerception
- "Yes, dude! I love writing based on dreams! There's nothing weirder than the shit your head can come up with when you literally have no control over it. Might I suggest, though, dialing it back on the use of such uncommon vocabulary? It seems forced, like you're trying too hard to say something. Merely a suggestion. Anyways, hope to see more, and welcome to DarkPoetry!"
Posted by Queazenart on "My Dream Last Night" by SilenttPerception
- "Love this poem. The first line "The worst part about falling to pieces is that humans can do it so quietly." That is down right profound. Welcome to DP"
Posted by Just Dave on "Doubt" by SilenttPerception
