Comments by All Members
- "wow, this is really good. a really happy but, a sort of morbid happy... The 6th stanza is my favorite! Good write"
Posted by Rone4611 on "Shattered Smiles" by Kali Ma
- "beautifully written,your words are painted so well here. sad...but real and i like it very much. well done."
Posted by AniDayz on "Shattered Smiles" by Kali Ma
- "I feel like this everytime I see my fiance. I hate leaving him everyday. Hell I hate leaving to go to the next room away from him. Beautifully written. I liked the flow too. Very nice."
Posted by Butterfly on "Shattered Smiles" by Kali Ma
- "aww.. its completely beautiful.. and sad at the same time.. i can feel this poem.. im stuck in a temporarily permanent eclipse (does that make sense?) n-e-way.. this is very good *skips away to read more of your works* *tears*"
Posted by MyBrokenMynd on "Shattered Smiles" by Kali Ma
- "Yes, completely relatable. And better expressed than most of us could, in such a state."
Posted by Liz on "Supressed" by Kali Ma
- ""Calm ensues as before the beginning of a fierce storm,
The darkness has surrended and peace rests content." this was beautiful I like all of it of course but this really struck a cord for me."
Posted by Unknown on "Hope's Tempting Illusion" by Kali Ma
- "This is curiously haunting. I am in awe, sincerely. This is going straight to my faves. Laced with such intrigue . . like an indistinct girl in an emerald-misted wood, concealed with awkward trees or something. Perfect"
Posted by Unknown on "Hope of a New Generation" by Kali Ma
- ""The spirit can only be young for so long
before despair conquers, and hope is lost in the mists" nice work."
Posted by Unknown on "Alone In The Dark" by Kali Ma
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