Comments by All Members
- "Sentiments like these, about enduring against ignorance resonate with me well. Many people feel no need to open their minds or listen, especially when they come from privileged places in life . I like how you depicted the qualities of people who deprive themselves of so much humanity. Good work."
Posted by Unknown on "Innocent as charged." by DarkJimpanzee95
- "I was in a similar place for awhile, in my own life, I figured if I pushed people far enough away they wouldn't be caught in the imminent meltdown, but those same people stayed and fetched me from the brink. Very earnest piece, stay for awhile, you'll find no judgment here."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Verses of Self-Shame " by DarkJimpanzee95
- "Very bleak and final. Also no skirting the heart of the meaning for you. Direct language. I like it. It also sticks with me how plainly honest your feelings are, and how well a reader can relate. Keep writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "Verses of Self-Shame " by DarkJimpanzee95
- "Your final lines stick out the most to me, because they seem suggestive of an implicit trust, or at least the image of implicit trust, for a leader or mastermind. This really does carry with it some insights into people's observation of politics in a world so clouded by chaos and lies. Interesting thoughts, if very ambiguous. I look forward to your future work."
Posted by Unknown on "State Of Confusion" by DarkJimpanzee95
