Comments by All Members
- "I actually enjoyed every bit of this, I love the unique form and flow of words. Great piece. -Do write on"
Posted by soul_versing on "Empress" by mindtrash
- ""chipped in all the right places" That felt like home..beautifully penned, crafty wording :)"
Posted by River Lily on "Empress" by mindtrash
- "'Chipped in all the right places' really loving this line, some great flow and imagery too. "
Posted by Unknown on "Empress" by mindtrash
- "nah, dollheart. this is stellar writing. if i had the money or ducats, i'd upgrade just to bookmark you."
Posted by Unknown on "Persephone" by mindtrash
- "YAY!!!!! you posted again. so very romantic. i feel somehow that this particular persephone chose the flames. the doomed dance. "we're so fucked might as well make it pretty" sort of tragedy. vitriolic and veracious piece. i love how it is so confused but never confusing or untrue of spirit. this has jagged teeth and one hell of a painfully yummy bite. i would love have loved her too, i think."
Posted by Unknown on "Persephone" by mindtrash
- ""And you, horned and pieced from glass vases
Chipped in all the right places" nice lines... welcome to DarkPoetry. "
Posted by blue angel on "Empress" by mindtrash
- "i'm a fan of the bizarre rhythm of this piece and its medieval content. some really killer wordplay, and i love how the visions came to me like a flashback. welcome to the site. "
Posted by Unknown on "Empress" by mindtrash
