Comments by All Members
- "I pretty much have to echo twi here...I loved the first two stanzas.I really know this feeling,so I could relate to this too...nice work.Really nice...Butterfly..xxx..."
Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "peace" by toy soldier
- "loved the first two stanzas. beautiful and compelling they were. and piece as a whole has alot to say to its readers. well done..."
Posted by Twilight on "peace" by toy soldier
- "The thought behind this is pure, but the rhyme seems a bit forced. Show us some of your non-rhyming works."
Posted by Unknown on "next to you." by toy soldier