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  • "I pretty much have to echo twi here...I loved the first two stanzas.I really know this feeling,so I could relate to this too...nice work.Really nice...Butterfly..xxx..."
    Posted by Railway_Butterfly on "peace" by toy soldier
  • "loved the first two stanzas. beautiful and compelling they were. and piece as a whole has alot to say to its readers. well done..."
    Posted by Twilight on "peace" by toy soldier
  • "The thought behind this is pure, but the rhyme seems a bit forced. Show us some of your non-rhyming works."
    Posted by Unknown on "next to you." by toy soldier
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