Comments by All Members
- "Wow short but to the point. This paints a seriously crushing landscape. Sometimes those little girls have such huge hearts that are so full of love that they burst out into the world and infect everyone they touch with joy, though. And often, when that happens, the world loves them in return. Maybe? Thank you for sharing your pain."
Posted by Dilated View on "Lost" by DarkDesire
- "This is amazing. I love how this has no structure but has structure at the same time. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Reason" by DarkDesire
- "amen... i can relate so much its not even funny.. but im sure you've done an opposite poem and told the person to fuck off or something like that.. but this poem does trip off my feelings now and then.. it was pretty good"
Posted by mywristshurt on "The Reason" by DarkDesire
- "short and sweet...and sad. i can definitely relate to this."
Posted by Violet on "Lost" by DarkDesire
- "quite a lonesome feel. screaming the words 'i love you' is like hula dancing naked. someone will either love it, or they will wanna know what the fuck you were thinking."
Posted by Twilight on "Lost" by DarkDesire
- "sad...AFI rox by the way...I have the same tank top- michelle"
Posted by AHHH on "Lost" by DarkDesire
- "this piece returns me to what seems like a past life, but wasnt--very powerful evocation here with your gritty, raw honesty--thank you"
Posted by Northstar on "Lost" by DarkDesire
- "Those are the perfect words. Sounds like the weight of love. A lot of writen truth in this!"
Posted by elisa on "The Reason" by DarkDesire
- "I know this feeling too well. You brught a clear reminer to me of what it's like. My commendations. -END-"
Posted by Unknown on "The Reason" by DarkDesire
- "Wow. I felt all these feelings the exact way that you've portrayed them in this poem. I'm not a big fan of love poems, but I'd call this more of a tragic love poem than just a love poem, which is really awesome."
Posted by Invader Lyn on "The Reason" by DarkDesire
