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Lost
By DarkDesire
I am the little girl,
who's lost in this fucking world,
and sits in the darkness
every single night
and cries out "I Love You!"
Hoping for some response.
But all she'll ever hear is silence.
And the only thing that will come to her is death.
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Copyright 2004 DarkDesire
Published on Tuesday, August 3, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, September 12, 2018, Dilated View
(582)
wrote:
Wow short but to the point. This paints a seriously crushing landscape. Sometimes those little girls have such huge hearts that are so full of love that they burst out into the world and infect everyone they touch with joy, though. And often, when that happens, the world loves them in return. Maybe? Thank you for sharing your pain.
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A former member wrote:
oh!dat |s curious .... i like it !
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, AHHH
(184) wrote:
sad...AFI rox by the way...I have the same tank top- michelle
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
this piece returns me to what seems like a past life, but wasnt--very powerful evocation here with your gritty, raw honesty--thank you
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A former member wrote:
pretty nice piece. i like it ~xBDx
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, DarkDesire
(1) wrote:
Thank you very much =) +†+Dark+†+
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