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"It's like someone slapping you across the face and telling you to, "wake up! this is reality and it can hurt". I love this. "
Posted by Nameless Pariah on "make believe." by illspokenwords

""dreams shattering into a million different pieces as the mirror and her fist become friends" I actually felt that one... amazing work"
Posted by Unknown on "make believe." by illspokenwords

"there is alot that this has to say...very true. and very relatable. i hate it when that happens."
Posted by Twilight on "the truth." by illspokenwords

"the closing lines were intense. they brought together the piece..it wasnt very strong until the end...you made it work. im impressed."
Posted by Twilight on "final mixed words." by illspokenwords

"very sad, very relatable, wonderful write- michelle"
Posted by AHHH on "thoughts at midnight." by illspokenwords

"If this is a true story, you should leave the bastard and call the police so he doesn't do that to someone else... Take care, ~V."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "my favorite song (it's the way we make love)." by illspokenwords

"this is so detailed, yet stark...very well written, almost too realistic.."
Posted by girlafraid on "my favorite song (it's the way we make love)." by illspokenwords

"very descriptive and i like the imagery very nice dear~ss"
Posted by murder_in_clubland on "struggle." by illspokenwords

"gorgeous once again~ss"
Posted by murder_in_clubland on "thoughts at midnight." by illspokenwords

"I really like this your very talented~ss"
Posted by murder_in_clubland on "final mixed words." by illspokenwords

"wow...I don't know what to say to the power of this piece."
Posted by Rebirth on "my favorite song (it's the way we make love)." by illspokenwords

"Wow i really like this. its beautiful~ss"
Posted by murder_in_clubland on "all for you." by illspokenwords

"very nice write. I like the word combinations. belle"
Posted by Belle on "make believe." by illspokenwords

"_"dreams shattering into a million different pieces as the mirror and her fist become friends."...that captures the essence of your endless frustration very well...welcome to DP.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "make believe." by illspokenwords

"this was a fast ride of rollercoaster emotions,that sparked a lot of imagery and feelings"
Posted by Anth on "thoughts at midnight." by illspokenwords

"WOW.."
Posted by Unknown on "struggle." by illspokenwords

"Amazing. Just lovely! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "make believe." by illspokenwords

"nice....well crap what's the word...combined i think...powerful none-the-less..."
Posted by Mischevious Princess on "final mixed words." by illspokenwords

"I have 4 letters for you... O M F G. This was just beautiful Wonderful write! *in awe* -Syn"
Posted by Syn on "make believe." by illspokenwords

"Wow. Powerful indeed. The contrasting font only brought it out more. Great piece. I really like it. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "final mixed words." by illspokenwords

"Wow...you describe how I feel sometimes so exactly...I love this kya"
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "thoughts at midnight." by illspokenwords

"Wow. I was really taken aback by this. Kinda blew my mind. You speak so few words but with such conviction and message. Its a sad story to tell but you do well with it. This is my favorite of yours so far. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "struggle." by illspokenwords

""we'll bathe in the sin that you fill your life with" I liked this one a lot too. You speak deeply into me somehow. Another great write. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "the truth." by illspokenwords

"I absolutely loved this. It flowed like a song and I really enjoyed it. It might make it easier on the eyes if you spaced out the first little thing a bit though. At any rate, It was glorious. Great job. -Glass"
Posted by glasshouse on "make believe." by illspokenwords

"Wow.. the raw emotion of this chewed me up and spat me out. Amazing work, so strong."
Posted by Lynaes on "the truth." by illspokenwords

"Full of deep emotions, for such few words you sure do get your point across. Great write."
Posted by Rebirth on "the truth." by illspokenwords

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