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- "Very...poetic, probaly a cheesy thing to say but true, life I'd hard sometimes and just to doe ones worth is as difficult as destroying an army"
Posted by Unknown on "I`m Dark" by PentaGram
- "I really dig this .... it has reverberated beyond my core .... beautifully written! "
Posted by Unknown on "Who I am" by PentaGram
- "This night be De ja vue, is true I see the night with you, but funny you should mention the Sanctuary... For that was the Place I came to rest first here. North Carolina not be north, nor Carolina be on the Line of States, regardless of Fates, I am here tonight, saying to you don't fear, be ye of one mind to me. Such being said, find yourself at Light sanctuary at the foot of Mount Mitchel, in NC. Up a long dirt road you shall find, Right turn, First, then to the end go..... there you will know the truth of things..... The whispers of the wind, Listen to..... for there you will find my voice to guide you. Hearken unto the Dark angels my Plea, Bring that which is mine to me. upon completion of this, do contact timecop8@hotmail.com. Peace to you, Accomplish the mission before you, and thus I shall reward you. "
Posted by Unknown on "She - Ice Queen" by PentaGram
- "Death is a doorway to a new beginning. Life as an untangable spirit. Becarefull that the one you Slay, doesn't hunt you for the rest of your days. You will be repaid."
Posted by Unknown on "For you ..." by PentaGram
- "Realities cannot be mastered, concidering that in just 1 reality, it takes a lifetime to master. So no, realities cannot be mastered when there are 999,000,000 realities and in each reality has, 999,000,000 split off time lines, meaning alternate realities and alternate time lines. Each of those alternates also has, 999,000,000 dimensions and all those has alternantes of there own. That is how time works, it folds endlessly on itself. If you think im lieing, take a good look at the Bermuda Triangle. "
Posted by Unknown on "I`m Dark" by PentaGram
- "Those last two lines are striking:)~ I really like it. Being lost in our own created worlds is something I enjoy, but stepping out to take on the world is an essential for mastering reality :)"
Posted by blue angel on "I`m Dark" by PentaGram
- "I am well aware of how hard it is to use the same rhyme through an entire poem. Yet, you managed to pull that off flawlessly. Respect to you. Also the subject this poem is on...one of my favorites. Revenge, annihilation, sheer rage through ones veins and warning his enemy, he lifts up the executioners axe... nicely written, your words make ashes burn again"
Posted by Unknown on "Annihilation" by PentaGram
- "this is a good basic poem, with a little work this could be a great poem, dreamscapes are tuff! nice work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Dreaming" by PentaGram
- "I liked reading this, the imagery and the outlook, the perspective was just about right, and the rhythm went pretty okay. Your choice of words was clever at most points, and unique at others. Overall, this was a pretty good read with a steady rhythm scheme to it."
Posted by Unknown on "Dreaming" by PentaGram
- "deep and depressing, a poetic blessing!
glad you dug this creeper up! write on!"
Posted by Unknown on "Chaos" by PentaGram
- "There is alot of truth in this is poem
for those who believe death to be a simple slumber."
Posted by Unknown on "For you ..." by PentaGram
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