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- "Thank you so much, everyone! The inspiration for this poem broke my heart. It was indeed a terribly brutal situation (I'll spare the details as it is not my place to tell them) and I think of it often. It was a relief to write this. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Fire Woman" by inhisbelly
- "This poem broke my heart. "arms impressed with patterns . . . like bike tracks frantically painted on fresh asphalt." My favorite line. "stinking skin grafts" really portrays the the damage that is so humiliating for her to endure under the guise of love. I think that your imagery is too fabulous to have studied unhealthy relationship in literature. That's probably the worst thing of all . . . that you may have really gone through something like this in some way. This is such a visual, emotional work that in some ways it's actually uncomfortable to read- it's shockingly real and upfront and absolutely beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Fire Woman" by inhisbelly
- "Love the title, you convey the trauma in utter inflamed brilliance... Certainly can see your not knew to poetry.. Thanks for sharing :)~ "
Posted by blue angel on "Fire Woman" by inhisbelly
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