Comments by All Members
- "Thank you for your comment miss (hope that's right) butterfly, sometimes a minimal amount of words conveys the strongest message. I hope to have time soon to catch up on some reading here...I am very behind. See ya.................................. ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "A Lie, she's Destiny" by Peyton1
- "Wow pretty much how most people feel after a bad relationship or breakup and in so few words, man I envy this style of writing!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Lie, she's Destiny" by Peyton1
- "Hi miss Kendra! So glad you stopped by, I always love your comments on my works. You nailed down a few aspects of this one for sure....there is also another side with much darker tones, it twisted in nicely when I wrote it so I let it stay. I must get back to your page to see your writings that I've missed out on. Thanks again, talk to you soon. Later cool chick.................................. ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Death Ryder" by Peyton1
- "Glad I caught you, since I'm rarely finding time to be here. Hum, lets see. Well, I personally see reflections of, religious undertones combined with music and movies, then a sexual touch near the end with the sweet release inside her. Yet, pale rider will always remind me of Clint Eastwood, but I do get a weird 'sandman' image, that being the reason I said music, and then a little Nicolas Cage imagery. It's quite taxing to try and climb inside someone else's mind for poetic clarity. Poetry is cool for it's layer effect, but I find it quite difficult to actually stick to one internal theme throughout on entire poem. They usually turn out to be a collage effect of personal reflecting. Right on - Ride on !!"
Posted by blue angel on "Death Ryder" by Peyton1
- "Thank you so much for reading, glad you enjoyed this piece. :) This one has many facets, the Joker was indeed one inspiration that played in nicely. Thanks again for commenting.......................... ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "We All Fall Down..." by Peyton1
- "You're right, it just wasn't my time yet. It happened a few years ago but I still relive it sometimes as if it happened just last night.....guess I will never be able to completely escape it. Thank you for reading, miss kinki, and I always appreciate your comments................. ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Krash Kart " by Peyton1
- "It has a surreal nightmare quality with a jolt, due to it's harsh reality ... welcome back , it wasn't yet your time ... breathe ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Krash Kart " by Peyton1
- "Thank you very much miss Lily for commenting, I sincerely appreciate it. Sorry it took me this long to see it, been away for quite awhile. Thanks for the 10 as well.....love those,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "Thanks for your comment and also for the bookmark my dear, glad you enjoyed the read. :) .................... ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "...If I...Crash..." by Peyton1
- "Thank you so much for commenting miss Kendra. Sorry I haven't been on here much in a while, I have really missed you guys!!............................ ~Ace~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Krash Kart " by Peyton1
- "You made my heart cry out briefly, as this is so beautifully sad. I rated this one a 10. Thank you for posting. "
Posted by Unknown on "My Heart Cries Out" by Peyton1
- "I knew I came here for some reason,, darkpoetry I mean. Wow, this has a backstreet Noir feel to it. Powerful stuff to say the least. And your author's note just sends the whole piece skyrocketing ... _I'm behind in reading, I shall return. cheers til next time :)
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Posted by blue angel on "Krash Kart " by Peyton1
- "You will find HER someday, for sure... Just habe faith.. Vodka and Beer are cool... They bring sometimes happiness when they let us daydreaming far away from here... Great work! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Not Ready For New Year's" by Peyton1
- "This is a very beautiful piece.. The expressed emotions are very well penned and I found myself asking to me "what if I crash?"... Thank you for sharing.. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "...If I...Crash..." by Peyton1
- "This is amazing. The emotions so powerful...the imagery just sucking you into it...like you yourself will fall. It's executed brilliantly!"
Posted by MorganaRose on "...If I...Crash..." by Peyton1
- "There's always a constant struggle between head and heart...and I can relate to that. It's lovely when the heart can win. I love that these few lines can have so much meaning. "
Posted by MorganaRose on "I got This..." by Peyton1
- "This one is truly sad and beautiful.. Your words flow with such naturalness, intensity and honesty.. I felt like a part of your poem.. Somehow I was partaking of your feelings of sadness and broken hope.. I understand such things very good.. Thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Unknown on "'Leaving Hope' behind..." by Peyton1
- "You are so right about that miss Kendra. Roads, paths, intersections, all add up to, "Is this where I should be?" I think we all ask that question.....some finally get answers. Thanks for reading, and yes.......I am smiling. :)........................ ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on "Unexpected turn of Events" by Peyton1
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