Comments by All Members
- "A shattered mind is a terrible thing to waste, I'm glad to see yours is not being wasted ! ;)~ love this write !! And that last line is killer ;)~"
Posted by blue angel on "Shattered Mind" by darkheartmagic
- "Oh yes very fitting word choice, wafts and flows and gloomy as the story itself.. Well done and forgive me I halted some time at 8th stanza "with this spoon I was feed" did you happen to mean fed?"
Posted by Unknown on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
- "Woooow dude beautifully creepy work!! I better apologize quickly to the doll I decapitated haha. Great write!"
Posted by Unknown on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
- "This is darkly beautiful. I love the thought of vengeance from a toy. Poor babydoll. They need love too! If ever there were justice for them, we'd sure be screwed! Nicely penned & much enjoyed :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Baby Doll" by darkheartmagic
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