Comments by All Members
- "agreeing with both ladies below... there's a certain intimacy expressed and felt in a more 'modern' way but without lacking a soft undertone and feel... the title fits it perfectly as well... well done"
Posted by NikesRain on "Couch fort love" by aquiouss
- "it speaks of a love that transcends the carnal and melds souls ... 'Couch fort love' feels comforting, safe and childlike yet fierce in it's loyalty ... I like it..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Couch fort love" by aquiouss
- "Yeah, after only two posts I can already identify in your words your own unique voice. Any writer with any measure of talent has their voice. Yours is a little harsh but soft and lovely as well. Unique. "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Time don't dance" by aquiouss
- "I know this was probably meant as sexual for the most part, but for me what stood out is the actual bonding that seemed to be expressed. Like every line was an inside metaphor that could only really be understood by the poems intended recipient. And that for me, made this lovely and soft. Well done."
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Couch fort love" by aquiouss
- "The romanticism and sensuality of this piece is very vivid and intense.. I like it very much! Thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Eyes" by aquiouss
- "I can feel the intensity in your poems, the beauty of sadness. Very emotional and deep, and although hidden, I feel some erotic magic inside."
Posted by Unknown on "Eyes" by aquiouss
- "I enjoyed reading of the warm 'wine drenched head' and cold fingers; the contrast was perfect. It builds up suspense quickly, but not rushed, and the lines finish it beautifully. Thank you for posting this."
Posted by MorganMoonlight on "All windows are doors " by aquiouss
- ""and I whisper
like honey on razors".... love that line along with many others.. deep and dark attention grabber. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Hey" by aquiouss
- "Brilliant crafting! I like the way you wove and melded the cicadas into that magical moment of awareness. They are quite hard to ignore. Overwhelming the senses. That impact is shown deeply, the impact of her and them in this world of possibilities. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Cicadas and smiles" by aquiouss
- "One of the most creative ways I have ever seen someone put a love poem together, and if that was not the intention, it sounds like it. A declaration of love that flows out of the heart like alcohol into a shotglass, completely intoxicating"
Posted by Unknown on "Treading into night and day" by aquiouss
- "i like poetry that isnt afraid to use non-traditionally beautiful words to talk about beautiful things. so many lines play on the hard and the soft, "with soft blankets of amplified insect cries". write more, post more. welcome to dp :)"
Posted by spikedwithLUST on "Treading into night and day" by aquiouss
