Comments by All Members
- "I can really relate to this. You have put my life into a poem. This poem is amazing. You are getting a ten from me. Thankyou for sharing!"
Posted by Killerdemonchick on "Untitled Death" by QuartzAl18
- "Powerful and overwhelming words indeed, I can imagine this almost as a minor-major rant. Nice wording, really punched the message out and I love it. Two things though, just some spelling typo corrections, "Aggravated" and then "manage". Then nothing else really everything else is just perfect ;) Cheers for the read."
Posted by Symbol on "Untitled Death" by QuartzAl18
- "Just borrowed much of you first line for a work titled "Untitled Agony" and mentioned in my author's notes. You never can tell where an inspiration comes from - FYI and thanks!"
Posted by dwells on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
- "Depression is a nasty bugger, sometimes we can overcome it, sometimes we cannot. Just try and not let it consume you and rule your thoughts, I should know this very well myself yet we cannot always help it. We do let it take over because depression tends to find us when we are at our weakest state. So, thanks for sharing this. Cheers "
Posted by Symbol on "QuartzAl18" by QuartzAl18
- "Depression is a difficult thing, really especially clawing out of it... Nice piece, I can relate, thanks."
Posted by Strataic on "QuartzAl18" by QuartzAl18
- "I actually like how you lose a little of the rhyme through the poem, it is like how tight and restricted one feels only showing little emotion at the beginning with the rhyme and then slowly and rapidly one unravels entirely pouring out emotions so vast and deep, it is overwhelming. Sometimes words cannot explain how one truly feels but you gave me a good sense of what you felt here. Great work. "
Posted by Symbol on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
- "Mmm, Lovely work indeed, I can breathe in those words any day :P Look forwards to more work, and welcome to Dark Poetry :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Solo Cloud" by QuartzAl18
- "Some great lines but it began with some forced rhymes that were abandoned as it progressed near the ending. Not sure which style you prefer but it was a very welcome effort and let me say welcome to DP! Keep writing!"
Posted by dwells on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
- "Robyn, pretty much said what I would have... dammit... That blood flow has many ways to come and go... either way nicely put thanks"
Posted by Strataic on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
- "I like your style, almost like a rap verse. Life is confusing at times, dark and meaningless, and other times it's bright and beautiful. We can control some of it with attitude and perception, but usually that's just a bunch of bullish... Again welcome - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
- "Welcome to the valley, you'll find many here that relate well to your work. I enjoy free verse and honest emotional sharing of thoughts and experience. I look forward to reading more of you - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Solo Cloud" by QuartzAl18
- "Digging the soul and message behind the words, just need to polish the presentation and delivery. Poetry is an evolving process. In response to the message, revel in reality and fiction- they find a way to intertwine."
Posted by whisperingwalls on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
- "so very sad..exquisite yet sad...your words seem to be bloody brail in themselves..if you need to talk about anything we are all here including me, welcome to this wonderful place. you will fit in well. best regards
~PL"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Untitled" by QuartzAl18
