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- "welcome to dp! sadly depression hits us all sometimes...some more than others....but we have to be strong inside first....writing for me helps. hope things improve for you. and thanks for sharing this inner view of your life."
Posted by natalie on "Mirror Mirror On the Wall" by poe_lover28
- "Being thrown over the line and dragged out of view of it a few times, I know how the worst of pains can be. You have a pretty clear view of the lost, numb soul trying to feel, trying to be. Very good write"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Mirror Mirror On the Wall" by poe_lover28
- "Very good write my friend. I can fit pieces of my own path into that all too well. I like how you set the rythm and rhymes thoughout. Nice work! :-)"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Locked Inside" by poe_lover28
- "Soured with the pain of such intense hurt, I know what it feels like and always feel speechless when he wanted to come back... despite being so angry and annoyed, I was rendered speechless. Though, done it once, he will most certainly do it again... I tell myself this to protect myself from getting hurt again... It is horrible but true. Judgmental even, something I try avoid being but that is so... and will forever be... thanks for sharing this Poe."
Posted by Symbol on "Locked Inside" by poe_lover28
- "i understand, its hard not being like everyone else, its better to be different, dont listen to them, be yourself, be unique, you are only free if you choose to be, to let yourself be free is your choice, weither to listen to them or not"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "I know how this poem made me feel, like we are kindred souls. I have suffered over 45 years in depression. Sometimes in my poetry it is like a conflict goes on within my mind which words will come put first. this is a wonderful interpretation of depression and longing to just find acceptance within our ownselves."
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Mirror Mirror On the Wall" by poe_lover28
- "This poem reminds me of the constant criticism in life I Take For Being Different. In reality I'm being me but they don't seem to get that, why can't they chill and let me be free? Let me live my own life!"
Posted by QuartzAl18 on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "thank you so much! Im sorry about you and your man, many people will cheat i hope you find your someone and everything works out! Just keep your head up !"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Locked Inside" by poe_lover28
- "Oh God. This tore me up. I am wondering if I should leave my man and be free again, as I want to be. He cheated some time ago and I don't know that I'll ever be the same. I find my own heart "locked in a lion's cage"..and sometimes, that's where I like it.
Awesome rythm...excellent choice of words...you have my respect.
SC"
Posted by Sister Crimson on "Locked Inside" by poe_lover28
- "I know exactly how this feels. So different from others, that the diversity causes them to look down upon you but let me tell you this. What is wrong to be different, personally I think they probably are jealous at how you manage to be your own person whereas others can only follow another where's you can lead yourself and have no need to follow.
You should be proud that you can be unique. I certainly admire anyone who have unique personalities because that is what makes people interesting to talk to. Well done on this piece. I can relate to your pain. "
Posted by Symbol on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "just reading your works is enough to help influence mine that means alot coming from such a good writerr!"
Posted by poe_lover28 on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "Very good write here. The introspective mind is usually the sharpest. Just know that you make the looks of your identity, both to others and yourself. If you don't like what you see in the mirror and can't change, atleast putting on another mask will help make things tolerable until change can be met.. keep the pen flowing as these feelings may surge. That alone may be enough to help"
Posted by Deviated09 on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "What a great piece, to look at the reflection that stares back through cold, lying eyes and dislike what you see. It's great! The only thing to do in these moments is wait for a better day and let go of the past. You may think you hold no grudge towards whatever happened, but that's what I thought too. The day I finally decided to leave the past behind and say I don't care was the day I could stand the person looking back at me. Sometimes now I can actually look in the mirror and pretend to see something worth looking at. That helps. Try it."
Posted by Unknown on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
- "Thats not what i ment, when you look in the mirror ,you feel bad for the things you've done, this means you have change, you are not same, thats a good thing, forgive yourself, that all you can do, how you live the rest of your life, thats what will define you. the people who really love you, will see too.
Best
EC"
Posted by Electric-Chair on "Their hate" by poe_lover28
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