Comments by All Members
- "hmmmmmm yes, thought provoking.... u know what it makes me think... "No Pain, you see" ... false, a lie. makes me think that pain is indeed felt by the writer and (s)he is merely lying about it. just a thought, certainly an interesting work worth reading "
Posted by Daemonicus on "Rip of My Wings" by Storm
- "Definitely... they're both great poems, too. They should be posted next to each other somewhere... it would make for an awesome contrast of ideas."
Posted by stormtalk on "Rip of My Wings" by Storm
- "not bad.. reminds me of Suicideseasons buttrfly poem. where he ribs of the wings. this could be a poem in contrats to it.. wonderfull. Monkey"
Posted by Dancing_Monkey on "Rip of My Wings" by Storm
- "I agree with ashrain. This poem is indeed beautiful. I like the way that you wrote the poem from the view of the blood :)Great job."
Posted by Unknown on "Blood View" by Storm
- "Beautiful...Ive been on both sides and the one your on always seems to hurt the most. I love this. ~ash"
Posted by ashrain on "Blood View" by Storm
- ""Wish I could amputate my heart" perfect way to describe the pain of loss as in storm, like being torn or to tear oneself to be rid of pain. "The Comedy of Errors", Adriana to Luciana: Great quote."
Posted by Unknown on "Storm" by Storm
- "Very good write hun. I loved the line "Turn me into stardust and blow me away" and of course the last line :) *hugs* :::OLd
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Posted by OLd SouL on "Storm" by Storm
- "I really enjoyed this. Especially the line "Wish I could amputate my heart" Never really thought about it like that...but that makes sense...lol"
Posted by Unknown on "Storm" by Storm
- "With every write your perseverance gets stronger..and there is a lot of anger in your poems..the perfect formula for great poetry.-Kefka"
Posted by Deliverence on "Hate Me" by Storm
- "very intense... you wish pain on that person in the same sense you feel. Your emotions were well delivered. your work is very good. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Hate Me" by Storm
- "Wow the anger in this was very intense. I like how you wrapped this up in the end with a subtle hint that if the person doesn't hate you after all of that you'll give them reason to. Well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Hate Me" by Storm
- "heh i feel that way a lot too, it was kinda ironic, it's like I feel those things but never know how to say it, nice job~finaldestiny~"
Posted by finaldestiny on "Hate Me" by Storm
- "Powerful,deep and sympathetic. For I have felt exactly like this and still do, its like you have written some of my feelings down for me. Excellent. Keep it up! xb.sx"
Posted by Unknown on "Hate Me" by Storm
