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- ""Magdalena, Daughter of the smog filled winds of Los Angeles?"......... Anita Magdalena, daughter of the Welsh mountains, no one has ever sang about me."
Posted by Magdalena on "Fortune Cookie" by daiglepoems
- "Magdalena,
Daughter of the smog filled winds of Los Angeles? I'm very stoked to hear someone enjoys my poem. I'm curious
You mentioned syllable count. When I read this poem it comes out precise. Where do you find it faulty? I need to know because I don't want to be the only one who can make them work. They have to work for everyone who reads them. Right thanks for the feedback. Made my day."
Posted by daiglepoems on "Fortune Cookie" by daiglepoems
- "This is great. One cannot stifle poetic expression, you can tighten the syllable count but not the definition in my opinion...... Welcome to DP. Excellent pen."
Posted by Magdalena on "Fortune Cookie" by daiglepoems
