Comments by All Members
- "Yes, I didn't quite seem finished to me either. I think you have something going there though that you could really work well with. I like it so far but it needs a lot more work. "
Posted by InsipidTouch on "Don't Say Goodbye" by smurfalwaz
- "Love this. I've felt almost exactly like this before so I really relate to it. Keep writing, your work is is very well done."
Posted by Unknown on "Dark World" by smurfalwaz
- "i like how it's not just saying 'i'm said, i shall commit suicide' it puts a new perspective into it, not really wanting to go but still hating everything you have, i really liked this piece, great job!"
Posted by frost bite on "Dark World" by smurfalwaz
