Comments by All Members
- "I've read somewhere that as a coping mechanism in extreme distress, especially in children, the mind creates an alternate being... A split personality who can cope with the stressor and the actual individual suffering the stress,
recoils mentally as this protector surfaces. Very thought provoking piece! Thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Fragments" by Quietus
- "I must admit, I had never heard of Trophy Eyes until I read this but let's just say that they have a new fan now. Just like everyone else, I can tell you really had fun with this and I appreciate that. This poem felt very passionate and the way you expanded upon the song titles paints a vivid picture and really speaks to me. Well done and thank you! - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Suicide Pact" by Quietus
- "I can understand the curiosity to learn what she remembers and the frustration when she makes you upset, but some things are better left forgotten. She only wants to protect you. I've also had times like these, but rather than not knowing why, I remember every detail down to even the smell. It's haunting."
Posted by Renegade on "Fragments" by Quietus
- "A powerful sense of introspection hangs over this piece. It is intense and evocative in its challenge. Certainly very personal to the author, but as a man who lives with many ghosts from an unhappy life I can relate painfully well. A tragic but excellent work."
Posted by Unknown on "Fragments" by Quietus
- "Ohhhhhhhh damn.. How crazy is it that you can make something like suicide sound sensually stimulating. Amazing job .. "
Posted by Devilish on "Suicide Pact" by Quietus
- "It’s nothing to be ashamed of, even the strongest people have their moments. It doesn’t make them any weaker. I’m glad this write helped you, and I hope you continue to carry on."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "Red Bracelets " by Quietus
- "Absolutely loved this piece. It is so very dark and painful, the honesty in these words is as powerful as the clear imagery. I salute the strength and transparency involved in writing and publishing this piece, and I look forward to anything more you share."
Posted by Unknown on "Red Bracelets " by Quietus
- "This was very well written. Great flow and imagery. Very personal and very powerful poem. I look forward to reading more from you. - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "Red Bracelets " by Quietus
- "I’m glad you found the strength to stop, I’ve been there and it’s not an easy habit to quit. Nicely done!"
Posted by IamZero on "Red Bracelets " by Quietus
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