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- "Writing with effort can't be faulted. This read like a journal entry. A mirror inquisition. Questions lead to confessions and confessions lead to more questions. None of it ever seems to lead to answers, it's a neverending cycle. When you stop asking, then hope is just a four letter word. Welcome to DP. "
Posted by Amaryllis on "Who am I?" by Till Madness Comes I Preach
- "I can find nothing to critique in this. How can raw emotion be critiqued? In fact, I so much wish I had the ability to write like this. Emotion seems to lose me. But anyway, this is a beautifully penned piece. I wish I could answer the question but only you can answer that. Although, I would like to think that that old person is still there somewhere deep down. Maybe broken but still struggling to survive. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by Unknown on "Who am I?" by Till Madness Comes I Preach