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- ""disguised as
reward." your short poetry I've seen speaks more than the poems who exaggerate .. the viswions of a metallic endeavour .. written like a pill you can swallow"
Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "Anticipation" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- ""don't forget to pick up milk"..."the trash needs taken out"... "the dishes in the dishwasher are clean".... I don't know... but I got the impression of a love relegated to post-its... the decay into menial tasks.... nice slice, well wrought."
Posted by Unknown on "Conviction" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "never quite sure how you manage to create a whole earth of dirt and dream with so succinct of words and poetics........i struggle to shutup. great and stinging thing here. ow."
Posted by Unknown on "Conviction" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "oooo...i need to stifle the commentary here; 'corinthians, eh? love, love, love.......i DO like the write, it has a wee bit of pent.up.breathability in it.....but as token 'saint' and 'mad', i have mixed theories and heartfelts on the corinthians line, good sir. :}"
Posted by Unknown on "Exhale; Begin" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
- "felt like a rebirth, to me, one without cleansing.... without lies..... but um... the unsheathed... just made me think of Shade's warrior, and I chuckled despite knowing otherwise. excellent tone, imagery... novel rebirth."
Posted by Unknown on "Exhale; Begin" by Crush_With_Eyeliner
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