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- "but they first two are written in first person, consistency of character/pronoun, no? and the last one seems to be implied that the words spoken are spoken to the 'me' of the first two.... but it's an apostrophe, end of the second "canto" :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Shadow and Child." by TheProphetUntold
- "ahhhh yes.. words of wisdom, perhaps... seek not but rest now..... I think you need not an apostrophe for "it's hold" above *points*.... interesting proverb at the end..... a rewriting of adages maybe.... a wonderful tribute, even, to the self.... or the persona? *bows* well crafted, dark magician."
Posted by Unknown on "Shadow and Child." by TheProphetUntold
- "The chaos of the endtimes surrounds this piece, you conveyed it just as a prophecy should sound. Such vivid dreams, and you were right, they do show your pieces in a different light. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Shadow and Child." by TheProphetUntold
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