"I love when a piece is minimalist yet profound. There's something about this that makes me want to linger and read it again." Posted by Salty Ships on "Ship Has Sailed." by TheProphetUntold
"You only knew the burn but never knew Warmth held those flowers there hoping for warmth but ended up singed, you wrote beautifully. Good flow and rhythm " Posted by Unknown on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold
""held them close in my arm but never my heart" This speaks Volumes..and lays heavy. Stunning as always and beautifully penned." Posted by River Lily on "A Thousand Suns." by TheProphetUntold
"You are usually concise & to the point with an image, meaning, & scene but I really like it when you explore with a little more wordiness on occasion. There is a machine attached to the bones of this write. The ending lends an effect that makes me want to read it again. Great read." Posted by Unknown on "The Infinite Aperture..:: ::..:..::. :. :.: Fields of Servitude" by TheProphetUntold