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  • "Taking the chances I don't want to regret missing...ps...check your mail, stranger. -Ebony Amore has shut the door and doesn't know where to find it...but through the hole her glances stole...trying to find the rabbit. Jack was nimble but never quick at dancing around the fire, thunder, rain, love, hate, sex, pain and the word has up his Ire.... just an echo long remembered and hoped to be heard again. Long live the Word."
    Posted by ebonyamore on "Untitled" by witch
  • "No matter what side of the window we are on, it always seems brighter on the other side of it. Very thoughtful and very nicely penned. Thank you for posting!"
    Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "to wish" by witch
  • "well yes...I like it...especially this > 'live your fucking life outside the constructs of perception thought up by people so dead inside all they see is the next step up, work hard, but enjoy your work' ...and the ending...'don't end up wishing you'd taken more chances , no regrets...' ... made me think of 'go hard ... or go home' ... :)"
    Posted by kinkifrog on "Untitled" by witch
  • "I love it, the format and stanza's went great with the writing style and thats kinda how my brain works so it seemed very visceral to me. I have to agree well done for your first work."
    Posted by Alchemist on "deformation is honest work.....i think" by witch
  • "never try and find perfection behind a screen..behind others words..only you can inspire yourself to move on ..and in moving will fall and get up... dreaming it off will only allow you to wallow in with all the rest not flying..not free"
    Posted by ubiquitoussoul on "to wish" by witch
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