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  • "Oh... yeah. I got this image of a mermaid all covered in concrete... when I was tryin to patch the sidewalk... and then I hit the end... and the growing older thing made me think... hmmmmm. like that. and so I thought, hmmm. those two things seem familiar to me. And that's when I recalled hangin with a bud o mine at a club in Cleve watchin all the freshpeople gigglin and bouncin... and I said... youngins are like jello... and oldins are like wood... and dead bodies are like concrete. Yep... I don't think he agreed. But this made me think of that.... and I like that.... it's better than when that makes me think of this... which I try to avoid. I gotta make this long because you don't have many comments... I'd like to have more mermaid references, ya know... hook me up."
    Posted by Unknown on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
  • "So... yeah. damn. I wrote this long rambling comment... and then I lost it cuz I was logged out or something. "
    Posted by Unknown on "Mermaid" by Blood Saga
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