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"This is the most memorable of your pieces I have read... it truly speaks."
Posted by Unknown on "A Bedtime Snack" by technicolour-girl

"The way this piece was written hit like a kick in the face. You've managed to capture a lot of passion and I love it."
Posted by darkdesires on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"well... definitely honest and direct, and that's the core of any good work..."
Posted by DIATRICUS on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"Except me, apparently... and maybe FairyBreath."
Posted by Unknown on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"I love how all males commented. "
Posted by Unknown on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"So powerful and raw. There is so much hurt in these words. Especially loved the second last stanza. Awesome piece."
Posted by Leith Plunkett on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"You capture with words what I have felt so mnay times but couldn't communicate. I loved every word and can 't wait to read more of your work."
Posted by Unknown on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"I was hanging off every word, I'll lend my heart for a good ol' burning, as long as you PROMISE to give it back when you are done..."
Posted by Dr Benway on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"Well, there is a definite forcefulness and power to this. Even though I pretend to be a fallen angel, I'm still technically male, so I'll tip-toe on off now."
Posted by Unknown on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"This had me devouring its content with sick glee regardless of the fact that I'm male(I'm a male-born lesbian :D) Loved it :) -Carl"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Dear God, Make Me a Lesbian " by technicolour-girl

"I'm sensing one hell of a kindred spirit, here. That may be good, may be bad, but damn, this poem is Effective with a capital BITCHSLAP. The plain language makes it perfect. And be glad it was only 6 months. 10 years sucks way more. Trust me. :)"
Posted by Unknown on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl

"i like. hard to say why "
Posted by Joey on "A Bedtime Snack" by technicolour-girl

"voyeurism always makes me feel like I am not alone, that reading this, somehow I know you. but we will never meet... I don't know how your hair smells, or how your eyes crinkle when you smile or even if they do. are you just words? And I sit here typing to reach you. Like it matters. This is voyeurism, letting us pretend like children playing pirates, that we are sailing far away from where we don't want to be, into someone elses, distant sea."
Posted by edenscancer on "A Bedtime Snack" by technicolour-girl

"I like this. Great tone and a lot of character. Thoroughly enjoyed. Thank your for the view into your window."
Posted by Unknown on "A Bedtime Snack" by technicolour-girl

" WHOA! this is some damn great writing ability, and well painted emotions. I felt every line.and this one I felt especially ...(""You're a fucking tumor to me that keeps growing more malignant even time I microwave a T.V dinner."") .... it's so exactly what I feel about an 'EX' right now. I'll be watching for more from you.. welcome to DP. ~RAIN"
Posted by Unknown on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl

"how is it that NOBODY else posted any feedback on this? you are not only technicolor, you are effin neon..."
Posted by freudian-slip on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl

"You cant see it yet,..but this will be but a mear strenghener for the unfolding years to come, I hope your next 6 months are a spectrum to your prior,..try throwing an apple into the mix now and again eh, ya can only eat so many cheeto's :)..college,.. get yourself out there."
Posted by Unknown on "TV Dinners" by technicolour-girl

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