Comments by All Members
- "damn, that was intense...and i can't imagine that feeling...you put it all so well...
"How strange he be the only one to ask me that
Everyone else is so eager to assume"
wow...that was moving..."
Posted by heroineyes on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
- "Wow, I did not expect that last line at all... pictured it as the husband. It went from beautifully romantic to crushingly painful with one line... Well written"
Posted by Echoes of Orpheus on "Wedding day blues" by Lylani
