Comments by All Members

"oh wow, this was so beautiful, Upside down on a glass ceiling, fabulous line! I love it so much ha ha."
Posted by serenesavage91 on "Walls" by Withering petals

"well done! .... vividly told! .... "Muddled in the socialist smoke of a Cuban Cigar" .... very vivid indeed! ....thanks for the view! "
Posted by Opklot on "Oh, to Follow You." by Withering petals

"mundane existence. another day..nothing gained.. well pieced together work thanks fro sharing"
Posted by natalie on "Cycle" by Withering petals

"you bokmarked your own poem?!?! I didn't even know you could do that! Don't be so vain! :P Anyway you asked for my opinion on this piece, so here goes..I thought it was very well written, some descriptive layers that mingled with the emotional content. Interesting use of line breaks/spacing...made the poem flow, and didn't clutter the content. I feared the worst with the title though, I've read many pieces 'like this' (as in theme, not the precise poem), this type of notion turns me off normally, but the sequencing and the overall view point, mixed with the seasonal descriptions at the start helped elevate this from another boring 'relationship failed' type of poem. All in all perhaps not stretching the boundaries entirely but a structured, thought-out, agreeable and visually stirring effort..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "They'll Both Sleep Alone Tonight" by Withering petals

"very downbeat; almost hard to fathom but maybe a touch of the political with the personal? The opening lines suggest almost sexual innuendo, whilst the 'blissful mourning' can aso be read 2 ways....short, but thought-provoking poem, well constructed Susu "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Cycle" by Withering petals

"Nice atmosphere. Feels like I'm on Mars"
Posted by skully on "Deception" by Withering petals

"Again, I must say, Your words are just so perfectly put. I too, enjoyed reading."
Posted by Unknown on "nightmare (in progress)" by Withering petals

"wow, this is really good. It just felt so powerful as I read it. Like every word was right, Perfect."
Posted by Unknown on "They'll Both Sleep Alone Tonight" by Withering petals

"This little sucker nearly slipped by, smooth flow,gr8 thoughts and constructed to a tea with points that all "exist"...xcellent write "
Posted by Unknown on "Thoughts that Can't Possibly Exist" by Withering petals

"I got an actual clip with this,.... i saw a girl at the stoop of an altar...prayer'ing, reciting, a soft volume on her knees...quite the trip, doesn't happen often...gives credits:)"
Posted by Unknown on "They'll Both Sleep Alone Tonight" by Withering petals

"This is, dare I say 'poetic'? Enjoyed reading this nightmare - great use of metaphorical meaning."
Posted by Crush Room on "nightmare (in progress)" by Withering petals

"intense, and beautiful, great work"
Posted by Unknown on "Deception" by Withering petals

"Using names as archetypal metaphors! Brilliant! "
Posted by DIATRICUS on "Deception" by Withering petals

"This took me a couple of reads... I especially enjoyed the last two lines. You have a wonderful sense of minimalist capture -- a tremendous technique. Thank you."
Posted by DIATRICUS on "Collective Sin" by Withering petals

"it made my heart beat and made my tempeture rise, truely amazing work!"
Posted by Unknown on "Concept # 122" by Withering petals

"Nice, good word play and works on different levels. Confusingly good. "
Posted by skully on "Collective Sin" by Withering petals

"this had a very stream of conscious flow but perhaps with more meaning behind it than first registered. Nice slam-like rhythm, would make a great stage effort with it's homophony; short but with plenty impact; political, heartfelt and emotional, very nice Susu..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Collective Sin" by Withering petals

"I don't necessarily understand this, but I enjoyed it all the same :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Collective Sin" by Withering petals

"very lovely work. You give words here, to something that I havent seen written before. I like it. -Heather-"
Posted by Daughter_Of_The_Moon on "Thoughts that Can't Possibly Exist" by Withering petals

"Filling our minds From time to time With thought that don't.... still.... can’t ... possibly exist. ........................I love this last part especially.... I like your work.I'll be keeping my eyes open for more from you ~RAIN~"
Posted by Unknown on "Thoughts that Can't Possibly Exist" by Withering petals

"wow. nice way of introducing. well written definitely. welcome to dp. :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Deception" by Withering petals

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