Comments by All Members
- "haha. i like...especially the ending. lovely. i agree...makes me curious. but the lovely thing about poetry is i can take it however i take it... :)"
Posted by RubyXero on "Tunnels" by Rock Faerie
- "yes. that made perfect sense actually...with the 'repressed with dignity'... at the same time you can have dignity while staring lovingly into the eyes of darkness (the form that you speak of) i loved the line, "Such remorse that smiles below the deep corner of the shadows."...truely it does. i love how that was worded. well crafted. "
Posted by RubyXero on "Inquisitions" by Rock Faerie
- "Beautiful...i absolutely love your description. you take me so easily inside your lovely mind. i'm glad i found you. those short stories were amazing. and you have super taste in music. ... back to the point. i'm glad to see you posting. post more. i love your style."
Posted by RubyXero on "Images" by Rock Faerie
- "Damn...that was quite a twist there. Not exactly what i expected, but nice point none-the-less. Well done. You have magnificent writing skills that pulls me into the story. I love it! i want part 3 now!!!...more more MORE!!! hehe."
Posted by RubyXero on "The Red Glow" by Rock Faerie
- "damn. absolutely beautiful. captivating... i read each word with excitement. fulfilling ending. "
Posted by RubyXero on "Soraya" by Rock Faerie
- "You write journal entries much like I. This is more like a prose poem than a journal... Filled with eloquence and well thought out ideas."
Posted by wilted on "Through Ashes and Dust" by Rock Faerie
- "I like the opposition between "the cold breath of dawn" that lies within the shadows of (the) reflection and the "blissful evening" that dignity draws one towards... the tears, (and years?) seemingly, are made from these working against and with each other, perspectives that never reach beyond sights unseen, perhaps... well crafted, evident artistry. "
Posted by Unknown on "Inquisitions" by Rock Faerie
- "haha..I appreciate your constructive criticism...but there's a reason why I included "dignity" and I promise you it has nothing to do with cannabalism..haha...and it has nothing do with a refugee from some country either...it's a little more complicated than that...that's all I'll say..."
Posted by Rock Faerie on "Inquisitions" by Rock Faerie
- "Like the idea. Hard to discern. Liked that too. Hopefully I'm right. Just sounds like reflections of a refugee from some country they were killed/tortured/oppressed/etc. But it could have done without the dignity part. Sorry. Attaching dignity which is a value deduced over a lifetime or during a situation is hard. Only criticism I got. Don't take it like oh blah blah. It's your universe you make it. And it could have used CANNABALISM....BLAHHHAHARGHHH. ;{"
Posted by Unknown on "Inquisitions" by Rock Faerie
- "I believe I can't stop reading your works, commenting them is already some sort of a crime. The way you work up your words is totally insane. I love your work... Write on!"
Posted by Unknown on "Like The Paranoia" by Rock Faerie
- "this is true, but theres no reason to conform your work to an audience of readers whose attention spans are insufficient... so despite its truth, i recommend ignoring it ;)"
Posted by stormtalk on "Soraya" by Rock Faerie
- "and ps, there is something hot about the moist warm texture of the air and blood shed / matted hair / this story was hot."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Soraya" by Rock Faerie
- "just alittle info about this site, usually if peoples attention isnt grabbed in the first few lines, they stop reading, and too much reading also intimidates as well. personally i really dig this, kudos girlie"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "Soraya" by Rock Faerie
- "This was an actually great write. I'd quote the whole poem if I had to say what lines I did enjoyed the most. Write on!"
Posted by Unknown on "A Bright Darkness" by Rock Faerie
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