A Bright Darkness

By Rock Faerie

How quaint. To walk meaningless steps down marbled floors, past metal meadows of contradictory illusions to what is real. If it were not for betrayal then the fiery glow would never be seen. But why must the light be seen? It is only a matter of time before it fades, because nothing lasts forever. A time will come when it fades, and I'll be at ease again. I fear the light until the darkness overcomes it. Every breath I take is an anticipation for a new kind of light. One that everyone at this moment would fear, except for myself. So I walk, with a cross on my back, brave, wise, and misunderstood, while the search for this strange new wonder dies with me as I blend...

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© 2007 Rock Faerie
Published on Wednesday, May 9, 2007.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • RubyXero On Monday, April 14, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    nice. i likes

  • Enigma On Friday, June 1, 2007, Enigma (90)By person wrote:

    excellent work =)

  • A former member wrote: This was an actually great write. I'd quote the whole poem if I had to say what lines I did enjoyed the most. Write on!

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, May 10, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    the title alone is ironic... dug the piece for sure

  • birdwell On Thursday, May 10, 2007, birdwell (138)By person wrote:

    great write, it's tough being forced into the grand illusion.. ~db~

  • A former member wrote: I enjoyed this -especially the opening two lines -really caught me..

  • stormtalk On Wednesday, May 9, 2007, stormtalk (727)By person wrote:

    'metal meadows' is nice

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