Comments by All Members
- "reflection/conscious self=muse, etc...such is the language's twists that the poem would be in danger of self-indulgently losing itself, but credit to your ability to carefully attune each line as not to hamper it..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "it's hard to really start a poem and finish a poem so originally, that ascertains its own weight and dimension in a nameless time...the opening pyschological pressure of the 'furtive muse' (inner self)...and the esoteric but relatable use of mirror/reflec"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "Anyone else feel like they've just been hit by an eighteen wheeler of imagery? I had to read it a few times, but each time was better. Absolutely beautiful."
Posted by crazyflax on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "i read this yesterday but had no time to comment. the second stanza was gripping. i also liked "surreptitious, muse your fingers wove.
wrapping flesh in ethereal desire." the way that sounds when read out loud is amazing. the whole piece is astounding."
Posted by dying angel on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "i love the thud of words against a tongue youve somehow conjured; a reflective/refractive refocusing piece; each stanza a bit deeper, more delusioned, more illusioned. . .. pretty write ~ness"
Posted by Unknown on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "absolutely...unbelievably...brilliant. A mosaic of all different types of thoughts and poetics woven perfectly into one. truly this is awesome, and in my opinion you are a wonderful poet. regards."
Posted by Unknown on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "whew ... this write has weight .. powerful and focused - very impressive piece you've built here - cancerous slow .. cancerous consuming ... well done .. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "the mirror imp." by nur hidayah
- "1. I relate to the beginning of your profile; I'm brand new but have been viewing the site for over 3 years.
2. Thank you for the comment! I wasn't expecting any because of how new I am."
Posted by asphyxia on "The Stranger's Spine" by nur hidayah
- "and yet another great piece of work. its a new type of poetry style coming from you in a way i guess. the rhyming sudden one word rhythmic flow. i can picture mr grass cutter man very well and get what you mean. "
Posted by evcfenix on "The Green of Home" by nur hidayah
- "This is incredible. The birthright of the wild and untamed. If only I lived as you, and I would feel this completely. Wonderful."
Posted by Unknown on "The Green of Home" by nur hidayah
- "I would say this was a jaunty rhymthic ride...perhaps not my fav of yours because of the quick almost freestyle like rap feel of the rhyming lines...however the attention to detail and the landscape descriptions and the overall word choice is what stands "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Green of Home" by nur hidayah
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