Comments by All Members
- "This is rather elequant, with the two alternative self prospectives, I like the idea of you being the angel that you speak of in the end of this piece, "she holds all the answers
but she'll never have it all." is you. I hope."
Posted by DoctorAsh on "ashes to the ocean floor" by denver nitze
- "the rythem to it was great, it captures you into movement with it... and I particularly like the line "if the words have no meaning , then how will we know?" seems to have an almost meta-physics nature to it"
Posted by Unknown on "saint television" by denver nitze
- "I think you should explain your reason behind this before you let them read the poem. Its quite beautiful when you think it and no the background to it. So Might I suggest you do that ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "bleed for the angels" by denver nitze
- "wow, this is an excellent flow. Welcome To Dark Poetry. I hope you stay. You may need to get your account updated if you look forward to staying. ][ ]["
Posted by Unknown on "dawn of reality" by denver nitze