Comments by All Members
- "very descriptive, creative, dark. exellent in many ways, honestly its poems like this that make me love this site."
Posted by Unknown on "Mirror" by Talia
- "One can NOT go wrong with using nature as a metaphor! This Was Emotionally And Visually Charged!!! Absolutely Amazing Was The Fifth Stanza!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- ""
Or night, a chilled perfume
of moss and musk,
a touch of rust,
a hint of starkissed pine,
tingling down my spine,
twilight’s sweet cologne." i read that stanza a few times. it calls out to me. the flow in wondrous. perfection."
Posted by dying angel on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- ""tiny habitations/where creatures open jewel eyes" The langauge in this piece was gorgeous and the flow magnificent. Fan-bloomin'-tastic!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- "I read this again and I have to say it's such a growth of feeling as you freefall through the crafted and carefully attuned stanzas...total kudos for great work here!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- "wow breathy whispered almost existentialist ponderings without absolute panic or condemnation; this one took me into an abyss corner of your mind; such versatility in your writes thus far - excellent"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Old friends" by Talia
- "the metretical precision of this is what holds it together; such a desolate sweep within an orderly frame: great writing, looking forward to more, for sure - Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Ghosts" by Talia
- "there's an ss effect in some lines that make it unusaully seductive in some ways - heh!! But nontheless in age of dark and confused ideas this seems to reflect truth of a diferent broken shard...excellent words, Col. :)"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mirror" by Talia
- "well firstly the vibrancy is here,dunno what you mean for striving for; this slithers with lush syllabic rhythms nicely playing off each other; assonance and consance rippling..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Mirror" by Talia
- ""The scent of morning falling soft
and silky on my skin" "molding landscapes to itself" oooh....i like you alot. this was absolutely beautiful."
Posted by verablue on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- "refrain that brings such lovely closure to such a classical beauty...I'd bookmark ya, but I got no room."
Posted by Unknown on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- "Yeah!! No doubt what Mr. Hatter said, very Romantic, with a light, bird's song rhythm... reminiscent of Wordsworth, perhaps, or Blake, with a nice variation on rhyme, very polished... love the apostrophe, and the sombre yet appropriately reverberating ref"
Posted by Unknown on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- "a sensual blend of light Romantics and contemporary naturalistic feeling; each stanza is courteous and easy on the eye with a soft lilt; velvety smooth. Col."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Morning, Night" by Talia
- "...its as if this is meant to be spoken in a soft whisper in a dark quiet room. that last line will linger inside my head for a while. very descriptive piece. so easy to imagine."
Posted by dying angel on "Ghosts" by Talia
- "i really liked this. "looking in mirrors of icicle glass/ripples marr my vision." very relatable. welcome to dp."
Posted by Unknown on "Mirror" by Talia
- "Your words are so vivid and powerful. This poem, especially towards the end, is so dramatic; I love it. ....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "Mirror" by Talia
- "i need to catch my breath. every line reminded me of why i hurt. "Filaments of web intertwine, and erase what looms in that pale reflection, ready to sink claws to flesh, nail to bone, tearing me apart, leaving me open." damn!"
Posted by dying angel on "Mirror" by Talia
