Comments by All Members
- ""I fantasize about going crazy" so elegantly written..with that unique sarcasm you've perfected. that ending, the incompleteness of it..like a thread..i hung on it waiting to fall. "
Posted by dying angel on "tarnished/tragic/travesty" by verablue
- "She’s locked on Broadway with a smoking gun
3 nicotine patches and a bottle of codeine.... and so many other lines.... gonna come back and comment again with my inspector glasses when i dont feel speachless...."
Posted by Bella Butchery on "tarnished/tragic/travesty" by verablue
- "this held so much turmoil...so much energy from emotion. you are stunning in the way your write. outstanding. For some reason I felt like I was in Hollywood. wonderful!"
Posted by Mylissa on "tarnished/tragic/travesty" by verablue
- "daydreams....stunning, maybe i should write on radom obejects, my sticky notes are overrunning my wall... i one of these people too, sad to think about it, and i fully agree with hate"
Posted by Bella Butchery on "this is romance, on a napkin" by verablue
- "I am unsure how I missed this, but you are perfect in your words. beautiful inside and out. "
Posted by Mylissa on "terminal blue" by verablue
- ""And every time I escape her for a moment,
For the chance to find someone who can love me for a change,
She’d pick away at them like the paint on her walls,
Revealing years of tiny colourful flaws." - fantasticly descriptive! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "seven days for seven years erased" by verablue
- "That's so cool that someone who inspires you to such a great extent has become a good friend..I suppose my girlfriend Sara is my great inspiration..without her I wouldn't be writing the stuff I do, though she probably doesn't know it! "
Posted by carlosjackal on "terminal blue" by verablue
- ""laced in temp. psychosis" HA! i'v always considered most haikus' Hydraulic
i read this over & over!!!
2coolTerminal-balew. Bazil Zerinsky!!
what a great name>>>>>>>"
Posted by zanewill on "terminal blue" by verablue
- ""Hydraulic haikus/Out of time//cheap ink and recycled metaphors" Your imagery IS metallic! To steal a bit of a phrase from your poetic blue sea. This is terminal, blue & raw! A blue supernova: “We’re taking a ride with the pretty things tonight”..."
Posted by Unknown on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "...Great vocal line! I love the re-used scratched lines, like a subBeat. Every shade is a layer of 'psychosis' poetry. Pure!"
Posted by Unknown on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "such deliciously raw and dirty words, it's like you bled them through a tube coming out of your heart, onto the paper. You are fantastically, gloriously artistic with your words."
Posted by Lynaes on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "Ditto what Z said.. This was, just filthily gorgeous. "I lick up trashed poems and dropped lyrics From your doorstep Dirty needles…leather boots.""
Posted by Lynaes on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "jared's writing is indeed an inspiration. he was a poet before he was a musician. he's also since become a good friend."
Posted by verablue on "terminal blue" by verablue
- ""verablue"..and thus your username is explained!! Great piece..sounds like you feel indebted to the song and/or the bands work as a whole particularly the lyrics..or else I'm reading WAY too much into things :)"
Posted by carlosjackal on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "I would quote some lines and explain my thoughts on them but that would take too many comment boxes of 256 words..All I can add is I hope you start posting more regularly again..You're ace, Bazil!"
Posted by carlosjackal on "seven days for seven years erased" by verablue
- "Your mojo is definitely in orbit, Bazil! This was such a tragic write yet beautifully conveyed with your pin-perfect placing of words and gradual build up to that pay off line that always leaves you in thought."
Posted by carlosjackal on "seven days for seven years erased" by verablue
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