Comments by All Members
- "Superb word etching. But then I wouldn't expect anything less from your pen. I hope you're still writing given all your many amazing adventures you've been on since you wrote this piece."
Posted by carlosjackal on "chartreuse and cigarettes" by verablue
- "There are so many beautiful lines in this piece, but my favorite section is "the cinematic story simmers
laced in wine and turbulence
my body aches with languish
she tells me:
"you were too young to comprehend
and you are now too old to understand". I love the flow, truth and mystery of this piece...like a whispered secret half heard, but hinting at a much deeper story...and every story at the same time. This is such a fantastic piece! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "chez renee." by verablue
- "very nice poem, i know excactly how that feeling wher everything talks about a cetian someone"
Posted by Unknown on "terminal blue" by verablue
- "This snapshot...Fuck, just expressed so well. Yeah, you captured that feeling we try to deny..That sometimes the place we've chosen as home isn't what it is when the rose-tinted glasses are taken off. "
Posted by carlosjackal on "sketched.skyscrapehigh.wastelands" by verablue
- "im in quite a state of shock when i read your works...im quickly becoming a fan...
wow...not sure what to say...ill come out as a blathering idiot lol...write on!!!!!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "this is no ordinary virus" by verablue
- "wow...absolutely amazing. idk what to say, except u have some serious talent...phenomenal! "
Posted by Unknown on "chez renee." by verablue
- ""the past is only here to kiss the scars from your eyes,
to lie to every lullaby until you slip" lush and dreamy... i just want to melt into this...truly a work of art."
Posted by Unknown on "chez renee." by verablue
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