Comments by All Members
- "some powerful imagery here; reads fast and passionate, urgent, heavy... Impressive pace, and there's something about it that makes me read it with a doublekick drumbeat behind. Manywelcomes to DP. :)"
Posted by purr_verse on "reach-me-down 8-20-06" by beautifulfallenangel
- "the final stanza was poised just right...last line very tantalising/arousing...you stumble a little on grammar areas and thats my oly gripe..sparse poem could be perhaps a bit more 'filled out'...?"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "9-7-06" by beautifulfallenangel
- "I thought the idea and content was ok..but the sketchpad I think messes up line breaks when you go for a prose approach making the flow uneven and difficult to digest...it's a shame...ok piece though..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "untitled (for now)" by beautifulfallenangel
