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  • "Wow, it's as if a psychic vampire wrote it in reality. "
    Posted by Moratha on "Untitled" by Mord
  • "...and Happy Samhain to you! I love this story and imagery. I read it as the song "Thriller" was going on somewhere in the back of my neglected brain. When I got to the last stanza, the music stopped, and the vampire was in my head. "
    Posted by Moratha on "A Vampire's Tale" by Mord
  • "it's a shame you didn't seem to make up your mind...you should have structured it either with more a metrical symmetry or free verse with the metaphors and images doing the do..."
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "A Vampire's Tale" by Mord
  • "this was excellent an idea, but for the choping and changing of rhyme;metrical attempts...and it became disjointed and diffiult to digest, yet conveyed some fresh and exciting ideas and language"
    Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "A Vampire's Tale" by Mord
  • "perfection in rhyme and sentiment... as complete a verse as ever there was, excellent craftsmanship!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Heat" by Mord
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