Comments by All Members
- "Firstly, this has the beginnings of a good piece of poetry - I like how you have conveyed the unrealistic view - almost satyrically. Secondly, the conclusion was a little cliche, a little trite - forgive the critic for criticism..."
Posted by Solace on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix
- "like reading into a lost forbidden tome, your words stir me to no end. wonderful questions brought to the light that many want to bury. and yet i'm reminded of a fog-lit graveyard.."
Posted by Muse on "Martyrdom and Fallacy" by Mathesix
- "oh! this is just great!...powerful and pugilistic...i was reading Nietzsche's anit-christ to find inspiration for my next poem...but this is inspiring enough!"
Posted by Unknown on "Martyrdom and Fallacy" by Mathesix
- "damm fine piece, kissed with sincere intelligence and perspective. itching like a squirming worm on the hook of my mind...anyone can write a piece on this 'subject;, yet not everyone can SPEAK....like you have in this. "
Posted by AniDayz on "Martyrdom and Fallacy" by Mathesix
- "this is so bold; it dares ask questions that cannot be ignored even if the answers are not what some would want to hear and that is candy to my brain; i'm so caught up in the message i almost missed the beautiful language"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Martyrdom and Fallacy" by Mathesix
- "um... I think he has creatively broken free of both the Shakespearean and Spenserian English schemes... his final quatrain is evidently novel and for that reason refreshingly unexpected.. nice!"
Posted by Unknown on "Sonnet for a Succubus" by Mathesix
- "wow... this is classic. oh, wait! is that a troche in your iambic meter? (haha j/k). Such form is very much work, nice job combining structure and form."
Posted by Unknown on "Sonnet for a Succubus" by Mathesix
- "holy fucker, I don't think they had this in mind when they 'coined' Shakespearean sonnets after the Elizabethans...21st century sonnet given classical form and contemporary subject matter...outstanding. "
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Sonnet for a Succubus" by Mathesix
