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"indeed, you fight your battles with words, and you do so with an ease i envy...i liked the last lines in particular"
Posted by Unknown on "If Prophecies Are for Madmen..." by Mathesix

"after the first three breaths of this piece, i was fully engrossed, and truly .held. alert and in intense.awestricken.demeanor while walking through this incredible masterpiece, powerfully striking and .stinging. beautiful work."
Posted by AniDayz on "Orchestration of an Elegy (Requiem's Rewrite)" by Mathesix

"fucking powerful stuff Josh, the kind of thing that devours my soul when I slip into my Darkness...indulging sin feels oh so sweet at the time, but at what price? for her, for me? *shrug* ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Orchestration of an Elegy (Requiem's Rewrite)" by Mathesix

"for i could surely never hate an angel, even lest she fall! i would be able to forgive regardless? your demon seraph that haunts you though--could prove a siren during a dark night of the soul, even to me at the mercy of your pen. "
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Orchestration of an Elegy (Requiem's Rewrite)" by Mathesix

"my comments on this piece could hardly fit within this damn little box; it screams with emotion, pierces the brain with imagery, wounds the heart with raw candor; it's power is quite chilling too... "
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "Orchestration of an Elegy (Requiem's Rewrite)" by Mathesix

"hahaha that last comment was number 666, as i speak of God, angels and sin! oh irony! ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"only actually a sinful act if one believes in God, angels and sin; possibly percieved as though, through mythological means by a complete unbeliever too. but the passion of this observation would fool me if the latter.~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"this whole thing keeps making me think of Tori Amos' "Bliss": "...made of you, but not enough for you" which is something i have yet to figure out, so this is a scruptious catalyst for something already of interest to me! ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"exactly what makes it so different than just a bunch of pretty words arranged nicely on a page...it gets inside the old brain and makes you think, a true delight! a naughty angel! what more can i ask for!!"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"and the worship of any figure/symbol, or any one being with complete power over man is condemned, though sometimes I see human indulgence as fundamental and unchangeable.. this piece has a compelling message."
Posted by Unknown on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"The worship of angels is a sinful act, tough. They were created to be more than man, yet still in service of god. her 'sin' was in allowing the worship"
Posted by Mathesix on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"post the other two or it would be as if i died regretting never having let a man know me intimately simply because we were not bound by religious/legal ceremony *sighs*"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"*left hanging, eagerly awaiting the next part* you're such a tease Josh, only posting one part! it tastes so divine coming off my lips that i must read it over and over to savor and relish your words! *swoon* ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"an enchanting story, the idea of giving in to human temptation, which is not necessarily a sinful act, it is natural and beautiful and passionate."
Posted by Unknown on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"Yes...you MUST post the next two...I've been left grasping at stones, even as I understand that to read just one more piece of beauty as brilliant as this will crash me to my knees...this is GORGEOUSLY perfect! I gotta fave it. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"its unfinished? are you kidding? its perfect...please do post the other two.i'd LOVE to read them..this is just stunning...i admire your poetry now, as well as your taste in music..i like you already! but, excellent write..cant wait for the others! -Kel"
Posted by Forgotten Angel on "In Remembrance (Part One: Angelology)" by Mathesix

"ps keep reading my stuff josh and flame it if you feel so inspired, i do want to learn and you have the gift. ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "If Prophecies Are for Madmen..." by Mathesix

"good first line...if ONLY....broken hearts heal...my broken mind, well thats another story after 12 years. ugh. i should sleep i'm crashing. will return when my brain has some seratonin. ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "If Prophecies Are for Madmen..." by Mathesix

"i keep reading this and thinking i get it, but then i don't; food for thought...something about it haunts me though, and i have to understand it so i'll keep wracking my daft brain. ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "If Prophecies Are for Madmen..." by Mathesix

"i am left speechless. this goes beyond anything i've ever read, because it reminds me of the very thoughts that tend to plague my inner mind. amazing, amazing, amazing"
Posted by Unknown on "If Prophecies Are for Madmen..." by Mathesix

"Respect. Such images, flow...honest. "
Posted by Drea on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"...wow were have I been that I missed this write. I love the imagry in this poem and the mood itself is in my eyes perfect. Great write-Laurie "
Posted by ZealousValadiction on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"clearly you have never seen East Colfax in Denver, Colorado on a Friday night; theres no way those women dress better than the former Japanese princess did before she gave up her royalty for marriage. ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"damn, that second to the last stanza is a killing blow; the whole thing is fabulous in all the right ways; its a pleasure to read your gifted writing as always, Josh! ~pf"
Posted by dp_whipping_girl on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"Wow... a real sonnet. I am impressed. Doubly so that you can conform such words to a set form and still have an amazing composition. *applauds*"
Posted by Thorn on "Sonnet for a Succubus" by Mathesix

"You craft a beautiful tangle of surreal imagery that hes me captivated... I am amazed."
Posted by Thorn on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

""It crashed among the vermilion fields/Of unicorn haunts and fairy tale wishes" God, have you portrayed a wonderful thought process here. You left me gasping for more at the end...brilliant! ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"*Note- The ending has been changed since Sir Solace's comments. Whether they still apply, of course, is to his discretion."
Posted by Mathesix on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"imagination or are just prosaic full stop. I thought the imagery in this was also divine and would say the neat twists of aliteration add a unique sardonic tone..almost like the cards from Alice in Wonderland...I enjoyed it very much Josh!!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

"I thought the poem was osomething a little different and I didn't feel the critic was all that harsh...but I dont agree, I don't feel it was too cliched because Ive read to many other poems on here that don't approach their subject matters with any imagin"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "The Last Poem I Ever Want to Write About a Girl" by Mathesix

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