Comments by All Members
- "hmmm...theres so much i could derive from this, this speaks like dynamite...the illusion(s) of reflections, refractions of .self. tasteful disgrace, the .eptitome. of human nature...hmmm"
Posted by AniDayz on "Mirror Creep" by Equinox Asylum
- "Excellence; lines scampering in a certain distance apart only to unite. Very impressive, Troy. You leave my senses worn over. ~June"
Posted by Unknown on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "I have been silent too long. Stately expression, emphathic to the point of despairing, grips a power that is rare, to say the least. "
Posted by Unknown on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "Well i would say the best part would be "With fire eyes and razor lips
with leather skin and blackened cheeks""
Posted by Unknown on "Mirror Creep" by Equinox Asylum
- "I will hover with you as my halo is floating off and I need to retrieve it for ai am about to sin.Several times in fact.And not always with the same woman!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Hover" by Equinox Asylum
- "I will make love to this poem if thats allowed - on the Pegasus tip of my burning decadent dreams; a place you have allowed my wings to soar...thank you!"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "powerful stampede of images in the strange calk of your imagination; invective assault of impenetrable metaphorical intensity.And thats just right."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "short yet powerful, you have a great ability to pack so much into so little, this was intense, great write ~Tamara"
Posted by Unknown on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "words like this are what keep me here."I am a casualty of war" this embodies all that i love about little, powerful pieces of poetry:like a chipped piece of a painting, vivid and beautiful. i adored this, from the title to the last powerfully placed word."
Posted by Unknown on "Four Horses" by Equinox Asylum
- "i wish Bethany would have written more... i also wish she would put a little more rhyme to it.. otherwise, its just okay for me"
Posted by mywristshurt on "Hover" by Equinox Asylum
- "wild opposition within a consistent and calm rhyme... a frenzy of ideas tearing at each other within a structure undaunted by the fray"
Posted by Unknown on "Tomorrow Started" by Equinox Asylum
- "your one of the only poets i know that can astound me with rhyme..usually i don't like it, and theres only a few that can keep me interested..but you use a perfect amout of imagery, and none of the rhyme feels forced. your amazing, troy."
Posted by Unknown on "Tomorrow Started" by Equinox Asylum
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