Comments by All Members
- "You want to be her beloved and at the same time her despair. I can absolutely relate. Love/Lust is rather insane in the most honest way"
Posted by Syringe on "What I Want" by DarkHeart
- "i love the 4th satnza and last word 'epitaph'. it just goes to show how death comes in many ways. "
Posted by Syringe on "Half The Man" by DarkHeart
- "I love the way you repeat the 'half'..It really makes the title tie into the whole thing. Realistic and nicely thought out similies"
Posted by monalisamarie on "Half The Man" by DarkHeart
- "i feel the rise of ... passionate aggression here .........pry my eyes wide open before you slit my throat........ i could trace the blood in these words with the tip of my tongue..... oh my...."
Posted by elisa on "What I Want" by DarkHeart
