Comments by All Members
- "a fool's love?...to place the world on a silver platter? no true love where one should die for the other. the whole world placed upon a silver platter encrusted with diamonds. inevitable demises linger. simple, stunning, beautiful."
Posted by Grey Lies on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World" by NeroMatches
- "wow, this is so powerfully exposing: the very subtlety of tenderness is presented unmistakably...that which is always sought, so inevitably overlooked, and nearly impossible to express has been made explicit by you"
Posted by Unknown on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World" by NeroMatches
- "*sigh* ..I remember this one.. and.. I cannot say exactly what gives these words such majesty except, perhaps, as Bethany said, their simple truth.. I'm as entranced now as I was when I first read them. This is complex on a new level. Thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World" by NeroMatches
- "this tells such a brief, gorgeous story, wound up so perfectly like a spring, then the ending sort of brings it all together. not a word is used out of place here, everything is woven into bits of diamond sky and gentle stars.."
Posted by Unknown on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World" by NeroMatches
- "but whenever i read this, i tear up..just the way it's constructed, and the ending is one of the most romantic couple of lines i've ever read. this piece shines so tenderly, i can picture two lovers gazing at the stars, enthralled by each other.."
Posted by Unknown on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World" by NeroMatches
- "thank you so much for re-posting this..i loved it then, and i love it now..i can't pinpoint what it is exactly that i adore about this piece..maybe it's the refreshing honesty, the conversation in such beautiful prose, the lovely images.."
Posted by Unknown on "Everybody Wants To Rule The World" by NeroMatches
- "...You always astound me and shake me where I thought I stood firm. Beautiful. I have longed to read your words and am so very happy you're back."
Posted by Army Barbie on "Broken Cafe" by NeroMatches
- ""passed by your eyes(and supernovas) and moved to see you better your place among definite photographs epitaphs, graveyard night lights" i'm completly floored. this brought tears to my eyes, it's so beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Cafe" by NeroMatches
- ".."i keep your poetry etched in the rough aortas of my drunken heart." ..this is so tragic. Your words taste age-old, but shine with such an effortless gleam.. it's absolute. I'm overwhelmed."
Posted by Unknown on "Broken Cafe" by NeroMatches
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