Comments by All Members
- "Incredible... I feel very much like the one running off the cliff after the birds, only to realize all too late I am not like them. I need to make those steps soon, In ways that I never thought I would, It is a struggle and who knows whats at the end of it, thats what is so repulsive about those later steps, the knowledge that in the end it could be worse, or it seems to be worse, when inside it feels like it has to be better. confusion abounds, loved the poem"
Posted by Unknown on "Keep Breathing" by DarkNephilim
- "I second that. This was such a surprise to find, a jewel of aching reminiscence. It makes me so sad that things will never go back to how good it was before.. you speak great truths."
Posted by Unknown on "Things" by DarkNephilim
- "Too many people (in my opinion) want to skip past the fun, the wild, forget the pain and pleasure and jump into the 'forever' of a supposed happily-ever-after. From my current position in life, I like the idea of this poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Youthful Passion" by DarkNephilim
- "A cold, hard kick in the teeth. "The night will fall, and all our lives will be cast in shadows." A simple and pure write from an obviuosly talented individual, loved the above quoted line btw."
Posted by Unknown on "As Dawn Rises" by DarkNephilim
- "It's interesting since it's actually totally messed up and still it has a very clear structure. Btw - I like your message."
Posted by The anarchist on "untitled" by DarkNephilim
- "You raise an interesting point, here; much of this is very true. It's good to see a new one from you; it's been a long time since your last post."
Posted by Thorn on "As Dawn Rises" by DarkNephilim
- "how do you know? hmm? our brains could be in vats aboard alien spaceships hahahaha. some lines are true, but some i'm a bit uncertain of. ~m~
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Posted by ApathysKiss on "As Dawn Rises" by DarkNephilim
- "this is a very good write the way you made it seem to be a magical world but in the end it seemed to be a nightmare......very good....."
Posted by Unknown on "The Beasts Within" by DarkNephilim
- "Wow,this describes my best friend's and my relationship...many people say we are lesbians and we're obsessed, but it's really that we just have a very strong friendship.Well,very nicely written.Beautiful."
Posted by Unknown on "Confessions of a Bestfriend" by DarkNephilim
- "this has such a unique reach to it....i can't quite put my finger on it but.......it seems to describe the missing piece of my heart as if i held it in my hand hidden behind my back........if that makes any sense:)...very nice."
Posted by elisa on "The Beasts Within" by DarkNephilim
